2020year1month18日雅考虑试写作回忆

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作者:常州朗阁
2020year1month18日雅考虑试写作回忆

小作文:Aset : 地图题

B 套: 柱状图

大作文:A套:Many experts suggest that if a country is already rich, additional economic wealth cannot make its citizen happier. Do you agree or disagree?

B 套:Some people think children have too much freedom. Do you agree or disagree?

朗阁名师杨钰点评

1.本次测验Aset难度中等偏上;B套难度中等.

2.整体阐发

Task 1:A套:地图题

比照一个公共建筑在3个时期内的变化。

参考图形如下:



注意:1. 地图题,注意地点方位和变化的描述;2.注意时间为1950-2010年,选用过去时;3. 图表中的不变的东西,也需要说明。

相关表达:

1. Replacing the original houses in 1950, a car park and a block for science were built.

2. To further promote the public place, various…. have been upgraded for educational activities.

3. A new main building, located on the right upper corner, provided 功能 for sth.

Task 1:B套:动态柱状图

Contrast3个年份,6个国家不同垃圾排放量。

参考图形如下:

1980

1990

2000

Ireland

0.6

3

Japan

44

50

52

Korea

31

9

Poland

10

11

9.9

Portugal

2

3

5

United States

141

190

215

注意:1. 动态图,注意趋势变化的描述;2.注意时间为1998-2000年,时态应当使用过去式;3. 图表中的数据不需要都提及,注意数据的整合。

相关表达:

1. There was a significant increase by +data in sth +time

2. Afterwards, the period from x to x witnessed a drop in sth.

3. sth fell slightly and then increased back to the figure in 1998.

3.Task 2

Aset&B套:社会类话题

A套标题问题翻译:很多专家认为假如一个国家已经很富有了,多余的财富无法使人们愈加快乐。你同意与否?

B套标题问题翻译:很多人认为如今的孩子有太多自由。你同意与否?

从话题上来说,两套标题问题均属于社会类话题,考生能够运用平常对这两个话题的积累加以论证。

从类型上来说,两套标题问题均属于议论文中的不雅观点类,考生只要从合理的角度展开言论,言之有理即可。

从构造上来说,两套标题问题均能够采纳四段式的写法:

第一段:标题问题改写+个人不雅观点。

第二段:讨论不同意或者同意的原因。

第三段:讨论不同意或者同意的原因。

第四段:总结段-重申不雅观点。

A套标题问题思路:

主体段 1:

讨论不同意的原因:

分论点:钱是好东西,一方面,钱能够鼓励人们更努力工作(financial rewards could provide an incentive for people, regardless of age and gender, to work hard),让人们能够买更高质量的物品(make a purchase of high-quality products as well as services);另一方面,钱让人有成就感(people with relatively higher salary will gain a sense of accomplishment)。

主体段 2:

讨论同意的原因:

分论点:太过有钱对人有负面影响(exert a negative impact on people)。富二代们几乎都没有人生目的(quite a large proportion of them have no goals or dreams since they can easily get whatever they want),没法子真正的快乐(In my mind, a person without expectations or desires would be far from happiness and enjoyment.)。

B套标题问题思路:

主体段 1:

讨论同意的原因:

分论点:1. 互联网的普及(with the increasing popularity of Internet),孩子们能够自主接触到更多的消息(children could easily gain information from various sources)。

2. 都是家里的独苗(one-child policy/only child),老人倍加宠爱(spoiled kids),孩子想要什么就有什么(they can easily get whatever they want)。

主体段 2:

讨论不同意的原因:

分论点:1. 政府已经出台了很多措施(Lots of measures have been taken by the government),初步管控社交媒体当中(begin to sensor the content of online information),针对青少年的内容(especially those which aim at teenagers),保证内容没有涉及不良信息(free of violent or pornographic information)

2. 此外,政府也初步修正青少年庇护法( revise the laws and regulations related to the teenager),青少年犯法也是会遭到必然惩罚的(they could be punished when they break the law)。

测验预测

1.小作文:重点关注线图、柱图、饼状图(重点关注动态图).

2.大作文:重点关注科技媒体、教育文化话题。

3.重点阅读2015-2016年写作机经,可借助《高分范文书》第8版典范旧题来复习。
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