2019year3month2日雅思写作解析(附范文)

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先一起来看看2019year3month2日的雅思写作解析及范文,由上海环球教育写作教师余曰简提供~~

不雅观点类大作文社会话题

Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

标题问题大意:

有不雅观点称企业应该至少给4周年假,能够更有利于员工的工作。同意还是反对?

思路:

标题问题不雅观点有明确的限定词,对长假的好处是make employees better at their jobs,必需限制在对工作好,而对于害处没有任何限定。所以在选择立场时,建议选择反对,即阐述长假的害处,标题问题中没有限定任何害处,阐扬空间自由。

审题,找出关键词:

4-week holiday:4周长假期(关键词在于假期的长度,所有的利弊是关于假期的持久)

make employees better at their jobs:有利于员工的工作(对长假的好处做了限定,文中的好处必需联络到有利工作)

提纲梳理如下:






MODEL:

While there has long been a controversy whether businesses should provide annual leave up to 4 weeks to their staff, I tend to say that we should pay more attention to the side effects of this practice.

Superficially, a prolonged vacation will be undoubtedly applauded by employees, though the intendedbenefits to work remain dubious to me. Living in the modern society with highstress, many working adults are toiling around the clock dealing with endless tasks, which might eventually exhaust their enthusiasm towards work. In response to this, a longer holiday seems to be a practical policy, which not just allows them an opportunity of recharging physically, but increases their job satisfaction.

However, beyond the seemingly advantages, comes my apprehension about the negative ramifications of this approach. The first problem we cannot afford to ignore is the impact on the productivity and efficiency of the corporation. The modern enterprises are moving in a direction where there are seldom any positions duplicated, meaning that the absence of any staff for a month or even longer will lead to the disruption of the work process of a company. Such a result is hard to swallow for any employers.

Another factor neglected by the advocators of extended holiday is that it might jeopardize the relationship among colleagues. To watch others putting their feet up for long might spark the jealousy mood within those who are still locked in front of computers. In the other way around, if one’s tasks were to be covered by other team members in the office, it would exacerbate the already heavy workloads of other colleagues.

Given this, I would reiterate that an extended holiday of staff should not be to the detriment of the development of company and the team spirit.

相关词汇:

sideeffect 副作用

Superficially 外表上

Applaud 欢呼

Dubious 能够的

Toil 辛苦工作

Apprehension 担忧

Ramification 后果

Duplicate 反复

Disruption 扰乱

Swallow 吞咽

Jeopardize 毁坏

Jealousy 嫉妒

Exacerbate 使恶化

Detriment 害处

相关句型:

Superficially,… will be undoubtedly applauded by …, though the intended benefits remaindubious to me.

However,beyond the seemingly advantages, comes my apprehension about the negativeramifications of …

Thefirst problem we cannot afford to ignore is …

Anotherfactor neglected by … is that …

上周白话高频话题

1.有趣的老人

Describe an interesting oldperson you know.

2.好的法律

Describe a good law in your country.

3.被欺骗的经历

Describean occasion someone you know did not tell you the complete truth.

4.帅气或标致的人

Describe a person who you think is beautiful or handsome.

5.独处时做的活动

Describe an activity that you do when you are alone in your free time.

6.幼时长大后想成为的人

Describe a person you wantto be similar with when you were child.

7.感兴趣的历史

Describea period of time in the history of your country that you are interested in.

8.重要的植物

Describe an important plant in your country

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